


In the first quarter of the novel it gets used so much that you every other dialogue line contains it. But the thing that becomes most annoying is the repetition of the word "noob", and how often the other characters use it. At some point I just gave up.įrom the onset, one can easily notice that the book is missing an editor. The book has some interesting ideas, which keep you reading for a while, despite some critical flaws. SO why the fuck to author of litrpg explain the same shit over and over and over again like their readers are fucking noobs?

NO! Do they explain what a fireball is? NO. Do authors of urban fantasy explain what P.I.'s are or werewolves and vampires are. Explaining the same fucking concept in everyfucking book is retarded. LitRPG is a large genre now and the mmorpg they loosely resemble are common knowledge in today's world. The author used to many forced plot devices and we the readers are left with crap to read. And his only real contact should have been able to spend fucking more than 2 minutes with the dude to explain to him basic knowledge or point him to a forum before logging on. Even if he is a noob anyone with basic street smarts can see him literally being taken for a ride. It is so annoying that it's like actually like interacting with a noob in game. I get the noob angel and the fact the author used it as a shity meathod to inform the reader but wtf. But as soon as he gets in game he act like a fucking moron with an IQ equal with forest gump. This guy is supposed to be intelligent and a scientist or engineer.
